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Audience Comments - 29 April 2009 Print E-mail
A Love Supreme
by Ian Moore
  • "Good dialogue. Jokes could have been funnier. Excellent acting."
  • "Reasonably well developed character but still feel could spend more time establishing it. Did feel a bit like a ‘stand up’ routine. A slightly disembodied collection of one liners – needs a stronger narrative. Lovely performance from actress."
  • "Good acting. Comedy timing not brilliant."
  • "I agree that the character needs to be younger – especially as she has a new born baby."
  • "Less metaphors, less Alan Bennet. Good acting."
  • "Amusing."
The Meeting
by Ron Enthwistle
  • "Needs a lot of work."
  • "Good acting. Could have been longer."
  • "Fab!"
  • "Good writing. Great chemistry."
  • "Writing – clear and to the point."
Two Good Dicks
by Rob Reeves
  • "Good / very good."
  • "Good script. Clever writing."
  • "I thought it was excellent – very funny. Maybe the husband needs to be a bit less pitiful – needs more aggression rather than being just upset/concerned? Loved the detective’s delivery and the dialogue was fantastic."
  • "I liked both the script and delivery, especially the detective (second one sat down). Deadpan delivery and really silly and funny."
  • "Excellent, loved the dicks. Very funny."
  • "Really funny!!! Enjoyed thoroughly – great script / writing, great acting."
  • "Very funny! Keep on with it!"
  • "Original characters. Very funny. Great dialogue. Laughed all the way through."
  • "I didn’t enjoy this one. It was in bad taste and not even funny (except the sexual innuendo). Can’t see this on TV as it is now – or on radio."
  • "Excellent premise, though I feel the staging needs work but writing shows potential for development. Would agree with radio comments but need a little contrast in characters and feel needs a sense of danger between ‘the dicks’."
  • "Very funny but think it might work better as a one off piece rather than a sitcom. Reminds me of something else I have seen on TV – can’t think what!"
  • "Try Baby Cow Prod’s (Steve Coogan’s company). Great piece. Richard Aoade (IT Crowd) would be great Jake. Keep on trying BBC3 may be worth a try. Good luck!"
Observations
by Alfie Jones
  • "Good characters and dialogue."
  • "Predictable comedy."
  • "Very good. Flowed nice. Never got boring. Two nice characters."
  • "Needs a lot of work."
Cleo’s Tail
by Fiona Maher
  • "Excellent."
  • "Very good. Never guessed she was a cat."
  • "The monologue is so hard to do without proper preparation... Needs light and shade, didn’t really empathise with character and could not see the mental process."
  • "Nice twist in the tale at the end. Very nice story – very well told. Great short story, written or performed."
  • "Caught in a fire? Car crash? Bitterness. OK just OK."
  • "Piece well acted. Well rounded piece."
 
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